Talk:Rain is falling

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i like the symbolism and the way the speaker is not just giving in to the predominant way of thinking about rain (sadness). The poem seems to end abruptly, though, and could be developed in new ways, perhaps by improvising a little more with opening stanza's lines. good start, though!Numero Uno 18:47, 31 March 2006 (EST)

i like the repetition, i think it should be longer though and i like the way you placed the line breaks to make short lines ~*~DyaMOnD~*~ aka Xx__NyZ_CLaRitY__xX